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Very charming!

I'm glad you think so! I was afraid it would be too kiddie.

I'm enjoying the story—especially the idyllic party in the woods around the roaring fire.

Isn't there such beautiful imagery in this story? I feel like I'm there.

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Chapter 4

Enjoyed today's chapter! That first paragraph makes me miss fires in the fireplace so much. When I was growing up, my mother always insisted on having a fire, even though it was some trouble and mess. There's nothing quite like it... I loved that line about the fire telling secrets to the chimney. And also the part about the visit to Mistress McShuttle.

That's my favorite chapter, too. I love that first paragraph. I strive to write like that. It makes people 'feel' the story. Gives you such a warm fuzzy feeling.

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It's the big day!